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    dots Submission Name: A Year Ago Todaydots
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    Author: rocker5871
    Elite Ratio:    1.37 - 191/147/90
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       about a year ago today. 4/20 when my friend tried to shoot up my school.


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    dotsA Year Ago Todaydots
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    A year ago today,
    you wanted to kill me

    you walked into the building
    with the worst idea imaginable

    you wanted to kill
    and to taste our blood
    even though
    i did nothing but
    be your friend

    i told u my darkest secrets
    you told me your fears

    i gave you my love
    i tore down hate

    but you threw it all away
    the day you came up with that plan

    to kill every one
    and then yourself.

    i should've taken you seriously
    should've stepped in
    to get you help,
    but i denied the truth.




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      wow, did your friend really try to shoot up your whole school? that's frickin' scary, it really is... makes me think of all the shootings that have happened, like columbine and now virginia tech.

    man, i dunno what to say now. that idea's still creeping me out.

    nice write.
    zd
    | Posted on 2007-04-24 00:00:00 | by zen-dog | [ Reply to This ]
      this is good, its scary and sad, but its really good
    straight to my favorites
    -rachelle
    | Posted on 2007-04-21 00:00:00 | by dark lover | [ Reply to This ]
      This is rather disterbing but it is a good write. I hope to read more of your work.
    | Posted on 2007-04-21 00:00:00 | by Depression420 | [ Reply to This ]


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