Why can't you be honest with me?
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Why can't you be honest with me?
Why do you insist on pulling me on a string? It's like picking petals off a flower. do you love me or do you not? (easy question) For my sake... please just let me know. I can't take this guesing and choosing game. Is this your way of fun? "I love you." "I need you." I miss you" These words just keep digging into my skin. And I fell hard when you said you only wanted to be with me. For my sake... please just let me know. I can't take this guessing and choosing game. Is this your way of fun? And now that I know that everything you said was a lie. I'm proud to say that you're the one that made my heart die. For my sake... tell me the truth. |
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T-T I like it. Its sad. Good wright.| | Posted on 2007-07-25 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ] | Hey...I like your poem...Specially this part: | It's like picking petals off a flower. Do you love me or do you not? And the sarcastic part: (easy question) Good job ,keep it up ! *Drakoniss | Posted on 2007-05-19 00:00:00 | by drakoniss | [ Reply to This ] | fantastic. that is wonderful... the poem...not the fact. | "These words just keep digging into my skin. And I fell hard when you said you only wanted to be with me." It's like picking petals off a flower. do you love me or do you not?" you've got it kiddo you've got the shine RAchelle | Posted on 2007-04-22 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ] | i know just how you feel, don't liars and manipulators just get to you? | it was a very good work, you should keep it up and keep writing, i see nothing you need to change -rachelle | Posted on 2007-04-21 00:00:00 | by dark lover | [ Reply to This ] | This is a good piece but it is very sad. Keep up the good work and I hope things workout for you. God bless! | | Posted on 2007-04-21 00:00:00 | by Depression420 | [ Reply to This ] | |
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