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Music of Words

Author: darkwiccan14
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Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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was up late at night bored and wrote this xD that's why its kinda weird! o well xD

Music of Words

My thoughts go on
the paper.
It's like music
in my words,
in my hands.
Don't need tape,
or a stapler.
making my own
symphony and band.
Writing it gracefully
and siftly.
Strumming the words
and letters on the lines
as well.
Coming up with it
all is oh, so tricky.
Listening to scratching
like it's some charming
Words are like my
Strong and Beautiful,
full of grace.
If something were to happen
to my music,
I'd feel oh, so sick.
My thoughts, my words, my music
are oh, so tricky and wonderful.
All you have to do is
keep up with my pace.

Submitted on 2007-04-21 12:29:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This poem reminded me of music. Like it was a song. Well done, especially the poetic elements.
| Posted on 2007-05-06 00:00:00 | by VampireMaiden | [ Reply to This ]
  I really like this write. Poetry is like a kind of music, and you show that very well in this poem. Keep on writing!
| Posted on 2007-04-21 00:00:00 | by Priestess | [ Reply to This ]

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