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A Place

Author: darkwiccan14
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Words: 88
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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yet again, was up all night and bored and wrote this xD

A Place

Theres a place where
I can hide.
A place that I
can relinquish
my pride.
Full of power,
full of grace,
if only you,
could keep up
in pace.

A place I can go,
to runm and to glide.
A place of my own,
Where yo I hide.
Blind in fear or fury.
this is the place my face
will burry.

Welcome to my
So Beautiful and
Welcome to the place,
the place,
a place that I
can hide.

Submitted on 2007-04-21 12:33:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  yeah this is good enjoyed reading it would wish you could of wrote more but its good enough, me to stay up at nite thinking writting listening to music, ty
| Posted on 2007-04-21 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]
  This is so beautiful. I hope to read more of your work. You have a wonderful gift for poetry. God bless!
| Posted on 2007-04-21 00:00:00 | by Depression420 | [ Reply to This ]

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