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    dots Submission Name: Your Wordsdots
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    Author: Priestess
    ASL Info:    21/female/usa
    Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 49/118/51
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    You can just go straight to hell
    And I won't even care
    The way you hurt and torment me so
    It makes my soft heart tear

    Your words are like a needle
    As they penetrate my mind
    But I have had enough of you
    And I'm done being kind

    Put a bullet to your mouth
    And kill your cursed words
    Today I'll stop you from hurting me
    Of that you can be assured

    You glare at me with one last breath
    I know what you want to say...
    "Your a stupid fucking psychotic bitch.
    And I'll see you in hell one day."




    Submitted on 2007-04-21 15:47:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      sounds like something my girlfriend feels when shes really mad and had enough of everything, ty
    | Posted on 2007-04-21 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a great poem. I like it alot. Promise me that you will never listen to anyone who is trying to put you down. Remember one thing, you are a wonderful person and you have a beautiful soul. God bless!

    Eric waller

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    | Posted on 2007-04-21 00:00:00 | by Depression420 | [ Reply to This ]
      nice poem. i think its really good. dont let anyone bring u down


    peace
    Ayah
    | Posted on 2007-04-21 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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