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    Author: FarFromSanityy
    ASL Info:    15/F/look behind youuu.
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 52/76/34
    Words: 188
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 808
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       This is basically about not knowing who you are and wanting to change & how hard it is.


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    I know that no one ever said that this life was easy
    I'm sick of screaming in the mirror at myself
    About everything I'm not and everything I should be
    As days go by all I'm doing is the same thing over again
    I'm losing myself, that and everything I ever had
    Help me find the missing shards and put me together again

    Cause I'm trying so hard to change, I hate that I am this way
    It's hard to live with a thousand tons on your shoulders
    And harder when your every fault won't go away
    Every demon from your past, haunting you till nothings left
    Take me off this icy road and just let me start again

    Take a look outside at the freedom of the birds and the wind
    There's a difference between the beauty of whats behind your window
    And the burning pain and numbness that you keep within
    There's so much you keep hidden inside, but you cant hide for long
    This is far too much to take in all at once
    And I'm not sure anymore about where I belong




    Submitted on 2007-04-21 16:04:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      What an excellent write this is. I was enthralled from start to finish.

    Excellent stuff from you.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2007-05-18 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      i love this. its something ive felt at times. thanks for sharing and keep on writing! ali
    | Posted on 2007-04-21 00:00:00 | by Ali Marie | [ Reply to This ]
      Aww. You belong right here. this was amazing. Keep up the good work.

    <3 black rose
    | Posted on 2007-04-21 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]


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