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Submission Name: Rendez-Vous Point dots

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Author:	caballero7137
ASL Info:	22/m/victoriaville
Elite Ratio:	0.72 - 9/104/123
Words:	217

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	758
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	600

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Rendez-Vous Point dots

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We gathering here on this site,
With the power of creation
Whirling in our blood.
Amongst the passion and words
Liveliness of a poem is born.
Lauding with such verve
Pathologically revealing
Obstinate point of views
Expressed with few words.
That tangibly touches lives
Coming from the World
Over the moon and stars
Moiling to the last period.

Submitted on 2007-04-21 16:48:14 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.