deep...very nice. everyone says that the one who learned would be the one who gained the most...but really, they're just the ones who appreciate what they have. the other one has the same thing and they didn't have to work to get it. but what was truly lost? a good question. and i haven't the foggiest notion what the answer would be.
Something good: I thought this posed an interesting question: Is anything lost when something is gained. Or at least, that's what I got out of it.
Something~: Check spelling- I can never tell if it is intentional or not and bad spelling makes deep poems a lot harder to read.