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    dots Submission Name: the riddle of riddles dots
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    Author: eagle wing
    ASL Info:    15/m/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 29/34/24
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Riddle/Serious
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       think....for no one can truly answer a question like this...for those that could have, are long gone


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    dotsthe riddle of riddles dots
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    there are two men
    one was givin glory
    the other earned it
    so which is truly happy?

    there are two fishermen
    one was givin a fish
    the other was tought to fish
    who is truly full?

    finally
    there are two cooks
    one is givin a cake
    the other makes it himself
    which has true pride?

    many of you would believe these answers are obvious, there not so, for in the end, both people will have to go out yet again and gain what they might have lost

    so the true question is

    what was truly lost?




    Submitted on 2007-04-21 19:29:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      deep...very nice. everyone says that the one who learned would be the one who gained the most...but really, they're just the ones who appreciate what they have. the other one has the same thing and they didn't have to work to get it. but what was truly lost? a good question. and i haven't the foggiest notion what the answer would be.

    i tip my hat and bid thee farewell.
    | Posted on 2007-04-28 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense | [ Reply to This ]
      Something good: I thought this posed an interesting question: Is anything lost when something is gained. Or at least, that's what I got out of it.
    Something~: Check spelling- I can never tell if it is intentional or not and bad spelling makes deep poems a lot harder to read.

    -Vas
    | Posted on 2007-04-22 00:00:00 | by hey.you | [ Reply to This ]


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