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    dots Submission Name: New Moon in Fruit Bowldots
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    Author: SilverScent
    ASL Info:    19/Female/England
    Elite Ratio:    3.74 - 94/106/71
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 108
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 632



    Description:
       Yes, it's metaphorical. In brief it's about new ideas not being welcomed.


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    dotsNew Moon in Fruit Bowldots
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    Concepts protrude,
    beyond the fruit bowl,
    into logical hands,

    and are tossed into
    a black sac.

    Musing in a crystal cradle,
    those citrus colours
    bounce inklings back and forth,
    like an infusion of
    blasphemy with holy air.

    Shapes imitate lunar phases
    full; waxing crescents,

    although none are ever new.

    See, the rational hands
    would sweep the bowl
    and contents into a sac,
    to wane as ebony.

    For that’s where
    a fruit bowl and
    new moons
    belong.




    Submitted on 2007-04-22 11:45:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I really enjoyed the abstract feel of this piece and I liked how you used the fruit and having "IT" hidden away - where those who hide it hope that it loses it's color and decays - as you said - not wanting to allow new or competing ideas.

    Great job!

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-04-23 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      This piece reads very nicely and it sounds very profound. Alas, I am at a loss when it comes to understanding completely what you were telling me. Perhaps I'm just too thick!
    | Posted on 2007-04-22 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]



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