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    dots Submission Name: Its overdots
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    Author: sweetme16
    ASL Info:    18/f/who cares
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 108/251/162
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 201
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 975



    Description:
       its about two people straying apart


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    Its over
    Can’t you see?
    Why do you keep turning away?
    Refusing to believe
    That we’ve grown apart
    Over the last few months
    Me with all the things going on in my life
    And you with your games
    It seems I barely ever see you anymore
    And when I do
    Never alone
    Never just me and you
    There always seems to be people wanting to take over your time
    You friends, teammates, parents and so on
    I always seem to end up on the end
    I’m not saying that its only your fault
    I know that I’m not blameless
    I’ve found out that I can’t take it anymore
    That I’m sick of all the broken dates
    All the times I got dressed up and exited
    And then got a phone call saying
    “Sorry babe I can’t make it”
    I guess we should have realized that this was happening
    And tried to stop it and stay together
    But now it just seems too late




    Submitted on 2007-04-23 12:32:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it, It reads like a secne from a soap or drama on T-N-T. (We know Drama).
    But life is like that.

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-03-16 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]



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