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    Author: babygirl09
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 69/63/49
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 639
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       awh, and what do you know, it's not to any of my exs... so suck that!!!!!


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    I admit, at first I didnt think it would work
    I was afraid of what would happen,
    afraid of being hurt
    But your not like the others
    at least you dont seem that way
    Your sweet and gentle and loving
    its in the things you say
    I love the way you kiss me
    The way you hold me tight
    I wish you were here to hold me
    through the lonely nights
    I'm glad that were together
    I hope you never go
    I want you to stay here forever
    So I can return all the love you show.















    Submitted on 2007-04-23 14:56:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      aww, this was very sweet. good luck with everything :) zd
    | Posted on 2007-04-23 00:00:00 | by zen-dog | [ Reply to This ]
      wow seems like the feelings my girlfriend use to have, well good write deep love brings the best out they say the heart pours out on paper, wish you well and good luck, tyson
    | Posted on 2007-04-23 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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