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Author: TeeTee
ASL Info:    15/f/georgia
Elite Ratio:    1.31 - 30 /32 /22
Words: 293
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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My feelings.


A part of me stays here with you, but most of me will leave.
When you finally see me walk out that door there's no more turning back.
Its not you its me but i guess thats how things are.
Is it suppose to be like this or am I supposed to leave?
Im tired of tears and being depressed b/c of your stupid acts.
As the pain builds in my heart the more I want to part.
What Im saying now I dont know if its what I mean.
It may be anger spilling out of the cup that held it in.
I love you with all my heart but Im really confused.
You say that you love me but i dont know what to believe.
Talking bout you'll get a job but now you change your mind.
You wont work to support me but you'll work for your peeps.
Yeah I know you have big dreams but you have to start off right.
I have dreams too but Im putting them aside.
Thinking about this situation is making me pissed.
B/c I know I did not do anything to be treated like this.
You said that you will marry me when I turn eighteen.
But as mama says things will change. So I know what she means.
Nights alone when I want to be close to you.
But you're out having fun not thinking about us.
I let you go out but you dont know when to return.
So wouldnt you be mad IF I CAME IN THE NEXT MORNING?
So much to say in such little time how do i spill it all out.
I dont know how but I wish you knew how I feel.

Submitted on 2007-04-23 22:42:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  its good to let others how you feel especially your loved one let him know put him in place either youll leave or he will shapen up, i did maybe he can too, Good luck wish you well with all hope it works out, Tyson
| Posted on 2007-04-24 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]

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