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    dots Submission Name: My mistakedots
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    Author: Lover girl
    ASL Info:    17, female
    Elite Ratio:    4.39 - 83/54/24
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 618
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 488



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       this is how I have felt since I let him walk out of my life and now there is no way to get him back


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    dotsMy mistakedots
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    Your friendship...
    Your love...
    Your promise...
    I believed every one
    I never saw it coming
    I never thought of the pain

    One moment...
    One kiss...
    One heart...
    I gave you my all
    I have never felt regret
    I have never felt so alone

    No hope...
    No connection...
    No future...
    I let you take it all away
    I am empty inside
    I can't forgive the hurt you bring




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      if this is how you feel when you let them go....all i can say is...damn you had it hard for him. love is never an easy task, like tif here said, never give up on love. without love life turns into nothingness. though you may already know this, you need somebody there just to give life a little oomph.
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    | Posted on 2007-04-24 00:00:00 | by Thief | [ Reply to This ]
      Ending a relationship is never easy - and it's good to get out these feelings and give them love to let them go.

    Forgiveness sometimes takes time but you will be better for it and your true love will come - never give up on love.

    Best of luck!

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-04-24 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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