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    dots Submission Name: how "she" pissed me offdots
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    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Rant/Angry
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    whats happened in this world of today?
    back then people would go out of thier way just to get what they desired...now they dont do a damn thing! they just give up right then and there because they dont want to TRY anymore. lazy fuckers...

    there's this girl that i liked but i told her nothing when i wanted to because she liked one of my friends, so i said, if thats what will make her happy then i'll do anything for her. so i talked to the guy and it turns out that he dosent date because the way that his parents are towards it(christian rules). you know, the whole saving yourself for marrage. but i tried over and over, but the kid wont crack!!

    so i break the news to her and she just gives up on the whole thing! my love has again turned to hate...




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      I’m sorry to hear that.
    I think you should just tell her how you feel; although she maintains interest in your friend there may be an underlying interest for you.
    You’re better off to regret something you did, rather than something you didn’t.
    You’ll wander your whole life….”What if?”

    Good Luck
    | Posted on 2007-04-25 00:00:00 | by theDevilsPocket | [ Reply to This ]


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