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Life


Author: LadyMustang
ASL Info:    42, female, West Virginia
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Words: 134
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Life



Life......
Should not be counted nor measured through heartaches and tears,It's counted already with memories and measured with love through
the years.

Life....
It's about learning from all your mistakes, It's not measured by each time your heart breaks.

Life.......
It's measured through the kindness you show, and counted in the many blessings you've come to know.

Life......
It's about keeping all your dreams and hopes alive, It's measured with all your faith you hold on to survive.

Life......
It's learning the person you are becoming ,knowing yourself, It's measured in living not placing life upon
a shelf.

Life........
It's about loving someone not being alone, It's about being a companion, an a friend,having someone to call your own.

Written By: Ladymustang
©@2006 April 24,2007




Submitted on 2007-04-24 19:31:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Wow, this says it all!
I see nothing that could be added to a very
inspiring write teaching and guiding one through the steps of life.
Teaching one to learn from each hardship that comes ones way and how to react to each.
Something, I myself needs a little practicing on.
What a lesson I've had today!

Smiles and Laughter,
~Linda
| Posted on 2007-04-25 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
  A Beautiful insight on life, a definite reprieve from the heartache that seeps through ES pages.
The rhyme scheme worked very well, (I prefer words that rhyme) : )
| Posted on 2007-04-25 00:00:00 | by theDevilsPocket | [ Reply to This ]
  Very true words, encouragements and sentiments indeed! We all take so much, sometimes, for granted and this highlights some of the more important messages we need to remember to practice within and to share.

Great!

love,peace,joy&smiles to share

tif
| Posted on 2007-04-24 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  This is wonderful, Wilma! This should be framed, and placed to read on a Library or Study wall. Great poem, with great advice! I really enjoyed this!!
| Posted on 2007-04-24 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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