Her mind remembering his laughter and smile
She had not heard from him in quite awhile
Those words in his poems written just for her
Touching her, the feelings now just a blur
What could have been if she only hung on
To a hope that soon she would not be alone
But the distance that would separate them
Caused her hopes to fade and then go dim
With all the miles that kept them both apart
The distance was only breaking her heart
Letting him go she thought was for the best
Maybe those long night she could finally rest
Days, weeks, months went by and yet still
Her loneliness and longing for him was real
Could she ever get back the love she lost
Was she willing to try whatever the cost
Questions going over and over in her mind
Will her efforts she makes for him be in time
To draw him back into her life and heart
Determined with him to make a fresh start
Will the man she loved so very much
Once more long for her, to feel her touch
It has been a while since I have commented and longer since we have talked.
Glad to see you back and it is nice to be back.
This seems to be a sad one for me because I can relate to it. I hope all is well with you on this subject but it is and always will be the way life hands you the ups and downs.
I find myself hoping that you are writing this for someone else because it would break my heart to know that this is your story.
Love is fickle in that it there is no predicting the outcome. We can nuture it but there has to be a mutual strong love in returned.
I hope that this comment finds you well these day and if I got it wrong then I am sorry.
Take care and I hope that happiness always finds it way to your heart.
oh to love, lose, and then spend eternity trying to recapture.
I do think you wrote a very pretty story on the subject. There is one line out of th entire thing that has missed a beat.
"Could she ever get back the love she lost"
Maybe an added word might help the flow.
Well hello & Happy Day Girl! I wondered what had happened to you & to your sis - I hope all is well and you will let me know
This is a very emotional piece and full of longing and perhaps, regret. Love and loneliness sometimes seem to go hand-in-hand don't they! This just struck a cord with me and sometimes, in general, with love, you never can tell - it's not so easy but "IT" is well worth!
Never lose faith - Love does prevail
I hope all is well and again, hello to you and hello to Sandra