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    dots Submission Name: Let Freedom Ringdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
    Total Views: 689
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    Bytes: 467



    Description:
       I just finished reading Papillon - a book (& movie - both well worth the time) about a French accused criminal who asserted his innocence but was sentenced to the French Guianas - a hard-labor island prison for life. The tale is of his determination never to give up and of his many cavales (escapes) and recaptures and after 15 years his cavale to Venezuala and his freedom.

    Very inspiring and very humbling that we all can find the most mundane things to complain about in our lives but there is always something worse.

    Do No Harm
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    dotsLet Freedom Ringdots
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    Freedom came to me
    a cell of body and of
    mind

    And my soul
    could not
    be captured
    or held

    In the bonds
    of inhumanity
    I was divine

    And, my purpose
    was life

    I was not
    in denial
    nor in
    defiance

    I AM

    And then,
    God spoke
    to me
    in beating
    waves

    of Freedom...




    Submitted on 2007-04-24 23:08:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Positive, she's right maybe that's whats so different between our rights, yours posses this subtle screeming message of a positive nature, while mine, well; don't. And she's right, most don't have that anymore, and yours always do. I liked this alot. The message, and it was something I felt I could relate too. Maybe it's just me, but it reminded me of Resident Evil, the movie, and kinda the main character(yes, I'm sober). This was nice, I appreciate the pov. Peace, love, and all that good bullshyt
    "so as thye will, as it is harm none"
    | Posted on 2007-05-24 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it a ot. i love your work. its nice to read. its so positive. nothing is evfer really positive anymore. i appretiate your work.











    tina
    | Posted on 2007-04-25 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Your words compliment a great story, book and film.

    Papillion speaks a message loud and clear for all of us to head.

    Very good indeed.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2007-04-25 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      I have to say girl, I agree with you 100% about the complaining in ones everyday life. We are just to blessed to be stressed.
    Until one goes through the agony of the man in this write, one doesn't know even know the meaning of misery.
    We are so blessed to have our freedom that some doesn't have.
    Very good Epiphany!

    Smiles and Laughter,
    ~Linda
    | Posted on 2007-04-25 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      hey hi long time thanx for the hey how are ya's

    been busy and have left writing alone for awhile
    i guess not much to talk about i guess you could say writers cramp ha ha

    i liked this posy it was inspirational i alwaz seem to get a little something when i read your thoughts

    sandman
    | Posted on 2007-04-25 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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