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    dots Submission Name: Beautiful Daydots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 725
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 701



    Description:
       Today I let go of alot of things that been bothering me! I felt like I lost 100 pounds! Here's 2 100 more pounds of pain to shed...


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    dotsBeautiful Daydots
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    Started living life today
    threw all my animosities away
    it&#8217;s what been causing me pain
    washed it out in the rain
    every drip that fell was a sin
    that I kept within

    Beautiful Day
    washed the pain away
    beautiful life
    here is where I start it right
    beautiful me
    I let my soul free

    This is the day I am born
    starting over no more torn
    no more pain left inside
    nothing left here to hide
    GOODBYE

    Beautiful Day
    wiped my pain away
    beautiful life
    this is a new time
    beautiful me
    I am, I am, I am finally free
    to DREAM




    Submitted on 2007-04-24 23:30:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is great i like the flow my favorite part is

    Beautiful Day
    wiped my pain away
    beautiful life
    this is a new time
    beautiful me
    I am, I am, I am finally free
    to DREAM

    i absolutely love it!

    LOVE~xx
    becka marie
    | Posted on 2007-04-25 00:00:00 | by boo boo | [ Reply to This ]
      hey long time hoz things with you
    i hope all is good
    i liked this thought it would be great if we actually could stand outside in the rain and wash our sorrows and troubles away

    great thought
    sandman
    | Posted on 2007-04-25 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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