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    Author: openxandxbleedi
    ASL Info:    20/Female/NA
    Elite Ratio:    1.11 - 0/2/11
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 686
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 483



    Description:
       Noticed something walking threw school.. hearing people talk.. and everything else..


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    The smiles of these people
    Are all fake
    They're to scared to admit it
    After they put everything at stake
    They tend to have their tears
    Falling to the floor
    When no one is watching
    Not anymore
    It's sad to watch it happen
    Every single day
    When someone new
    Has turned out that way
    So I sit here
    Thinking quietly
    Maybe I am one of them
    Maybe... That's just like me...




    Submitted on 2007-04-25 12:06:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, this poem is realistic. I can actually picture someone, a new kid maybe, walking down the halls of my school thinking, "Am I alone here or something?" I had a very good visual of this poem, and that's good, I think. But, good job!!!
    -AnGeL
    | Posted on 2007-04-27 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]

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