sorry by draconus

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Submission Name: sorry dots

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Author:	draconus
ASL Info:	23/MALE/UK
Elite Ratio:	1.89 - 49/101/59
Words:	151

Class/Type:	Poetry/Venting
Total Views:	1288
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	830

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sorry

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i'm sorry for the pain i gave you
and i am sorry i am still hear at you door.

im sorry that you let me in.
you should be sorry for leading me on

i'm sorry i am still alive
and i'm sorry i hate myself so much.

but think sorry is just a word
and means nothing to you at all

i said sorry so many time and i have allways
meant it to you and myself.

and you said it wouldn't happen again but it did.

so this is to say sorry i ever meet you
and for what you made me be today.

i hate myself for knowing you,
and i hate your name inside my ears.

i am sorry i ever exited
you never cared and for the i am sorry
when it should be you.

Submitted on 2007-04-25 12:19:04 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  I used to apologize when I hadn't done anything, I still do that. It's not a good way to go about living life but it works for me. Just take it easy hopefully things will blow over soon. Good write.
| Posted on 2007-05-02 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]
  Man, you tell me to cheer up! Anyway, its pretty good. Hope things go well. Shadow
| Posted on 2007-04-28 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]
  Its ok Draconus we all go through hardships in our live i love it and i can understand your pain.
| Posted on 2007-04-26 00:00:00 | by Druecilla | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow... I can totally relate, it's scary.
I like it, it's definently a favorite.
Keep up the good work.
-Kimmi
| Posted on 2007-04-25 00:00:00 | by Childe-Wrote | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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