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    dots Submission Name: sorrydots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    23/MALE/UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 49/101/59
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 1007
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotssorrydots
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    i'm sorry for the pain i gave you
    and i am sorry i am still hear at you door.

    im sorry that you let me in.
    you should be sorry for leading me on

    i'm sorry i am still alive
    and i'm sorry i hate myself so much.

    but think sorry is just a word
    and means nothing to you at all

    i said sorry so many time and i have allways
    meant it to you and myself.

    and you said it wouldn't happen again but it did.

    so this is to say sorry i ever meet you
    and for what you made me be today.

    i hate myself for knowing you,
    and i hate your name inside my ears.

    i am sorry i ever exited
    you never cared and for the i am sorry
    when it should be you.




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    ||| Comments |||
      I used to apologize when I hadn't done anything, I still do that. It's not a good way to go about living life but it works for me. Just take it easy hopefully things will blow over soon. Good write.
    | Posted on 2007-05-02 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]
      Man, you tell me to cheer up! Anyway, its pretty good. Hope things go well. Shadow
    | Posted on 2007-04-28 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]
      Its ok Draconus we all go through hardships in our live i love it and i can understand your pain.
    | Posted on 2007-04-26 00:00:00 | by Druecilla | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow... I can totally relate, it's scary.
    I like it, it's definently a favorite.
    Keep up the good work.
    -Kimmi
    | Posted on 2007-04-25 00:00:00 | by Childe-Wrote | [ Reply to This ]


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