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    dots Submission Name: Sweet miserydots
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    Author: lilathalone
    ASL Info:    25/ F/ florida
    Elite Ratio:    2.68 - 17/28/21
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSweet miserydots
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    You are my poison, and you are my anti-venom
    You are my downfall, but you are my grace
    Your everything I want, and nothing I need
    A walking contradiction
    your my sweet misery
    The angel sleeps beside me
    But there's a devil in this bed
    god knows how I have sinned
    And in this bed I burn again
    with my sweet misery
    it's still a mystery, what bind's me to you
    My demon saint of ice and fire
    Your halo don't hide your horns, lover
    And your wings belong to me tonight
    Oh, my sweet misery
    Not god or the devil will take me
    My love, sweet misery




    Submitted on 2007-04-25 12:23:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is wicked! It reminds me of a blues song. Others will probably go on and on about punctuation, etc... but I like it raw like this. It conjures quick images of a love-hate relationship that any self-respecting blues man has had to endure. Thanks for sharing it with us.
    | Posted on 2007-04-25 00:00:00 | by batgirl | [ Reply to This ]


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