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Author: mrmundane
ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc
Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 47 /96 /78
Words: 137
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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it's about having to work to survive and having a shitty ass job to survive.


remind me again why i suffer
why every day is just simply another
and every activity is yet another distraction
to keep my mind absent of my dissatisfaction
tomorrow morning i will awake; with a stride in my step
and get called in to work for more stabs at my pep
wilted and negligible my spirit's on fire
and days of these things i grow to require
how heaven has cursed us of days with these things
of which i'd never choose over the rarity of holidays
and seldom i speak with my own real voice
there occurs no lasting period of personal choice
living for us becomes a vapid accessory
which fills my recall with a celluloid memory
of who i am, and what everyone sees
my dreams are the only things worth keeping for memories.

Submitted on 2007-04-25 15:06:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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