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    dots Submission Name: This Time Arounddots
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    Author: 777sacrites777
    ASL Info:    17/f/ tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.88 - 297/159/67
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Betrayal
    Total Views: 204
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 628



    Description:
       to an ex-boyfriend that was a habitual liar.


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    dotsThis Time Arounddots
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    Stop with the lies
    for once in your life,
    cause you've pulled this
    one too many times.

    Your worn out excuses
    just aren't enough.
    After all the deceit,
    forgiving you's tough.

    Sorry won't cut it
    with me, it's too late.
    So this time around,
    I'll give back your hate.

    Getting even with you
    will kill my pain.
    This karma is all
    I need to keep sane.

    Revenge is great,
    it dries the tears.
    It heals the hurt
    you've caused me for years.




    Submitted on 2007-04-25 15:51:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      you have a pretty good rhyming thing going. i can sense the hurt that you are trying to portray. i like the way that you are saying that you are not going to let that way that he hurt you destroy you and you are going to stay strong and fight back. i liked it. keep writing and take care.
    | Posted on 2007-09-29 00:00:00 | by maquiladora | [ Reply to This ]
      it's good to be honest isn't it? :) always be that way when you write, you did good. i will say this though regarding revenge towards someone who hurt you, if you don't mind....

    "the best form of revenge...is living well" if that makes any sense?
    | Posted on 2007-07-12 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ]



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