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    dots Submission Name: Whispersdots
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    Author: 777sacrites777
    ASL Info:    19/f/ TX baby!
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 302/166/70
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Please calm these raging
    thoughts from hell.
    Relieve my poor mind
    of all that they tell.

    They haunt my dreams,
    these whispers inside.
    With little to no mercy,
    there's no where to hide.

    It's this regret I hold,
    this continuous sorrow.
    I can only pray
    that it's gone tomorrow.

    You can't imagine
    all the pain
    it throws on me,
    to drive me insane.

    I just suck it up
    and pretend it's a phase.
    Though this nightmare I'm sure
    is here to stay.




    Submitted on 2007-04-25 16:02:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I picked this one because of the title. I'm glad I did ... very dark emotions, perfect for Halloween. I hope all of your thoughts are not so bleak. Good job.
    | Posted on 2007-10-10 00:00:00 | by oixi | [ Reply to This ]
      well this is really deep emotional poetry you tell of your life what you go threw seems like something I would write about my life so confuse and hurted but we poets only live to tell the stories in life, hope you well in life wish the best of luck to you and your family, I guess to pray for another good day that will forever change,
    Tyson James Keepseagle
    | Posted on 2007-04-26 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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