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    dots Submission Name: Embracingdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Often, when I read the parable of the father and his two sons - Luke 15: 11-32 - forgiveness is the key - the brother who returns to the father - not the prodigal son - but the lost son - his Father welcomes him home "For this my son was dead and is alive again: he was lost and is found."

    The devil is our fears - for all is forgiven - we perpetuate fears for a multitude of reasons - but, the challenge to embrace fear (evil) and return 2 "IT" Love.

    On a separate note, I was in the gas station today and Rick James "Super Freak" came on & I thought, "What if, for one second the whole world just stopped and did their own little dance of freedom to that - what a happier place this world would be

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share


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    The day "i" embraced
    the devil
    and prayed in Faith,
    "Give me all
    you got"...

    For my soul
    is God
    and full of Love
    "IT" cannot
    be bought

    Born to the worl
    a human
    to experience
    all your

    I gladly Love
    "IT" ALL
    though I've
    been called

    I used to fear
    you Satan
    and thought I could
    n'er live

    In all the pain
    and suffering
    you so do
    seem to give

    When Jesus came
    and touched
    just this very

    Saying gently
    he is nothing
    but your fear

    For "IT"
    is ALL
    and all
    in ALL
    are we

    And, everything's
    tis as simple
    as can be

    Submitted on 2007-04-25 20:03:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I great opening line! The all in all in all was a bit confusing at first, but this quenched my thirst bit droplets that burst from the seam of this canteen. My only critisizm it that you forgot the d on world. peace. blessed be.
    | Posted on 2007-08-03 00:00:00 | by shaman | [ Reply to This ]
      yes tif...embracing the Devil in us releases many treasures and if we are insane I question the meaning of sanity?

    Love to you

    | Posted on 2007-05-25 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]
      Very good Tif'
    Nothing like that refreshing feeling of cleansing, is it? A testimony and message in a poem. What a wise idea!
    Loved it!

    Smiles and Laughter,
    | Posted on 2007-04-26 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it. i dont really do the religious poetry anymore but this is good. jesus loves you, right??? good job

    | Posted on 2007-04-26 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      GOOD ONE
    | Posted on 2007-04-25 00:00:00 | by SAMEER | [ Reply to This ]

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