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    Author: EternallyMystic
    ASL Info:    18-F-Mich
    Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 9/18/25
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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       something that rattled my head so bad i woke out of a dead sleep to get it out of my head


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    you say that you love me
    you say that you care
    but what is it that makes you care
    my beautiful smile my dazeful eyes?
    or is it the fact that you can do what you wish to me and you know i wont complain?
    i wish it would have been different
    i wish i knew you ment all those enticeing words you say
    but what i am really your excuse to hide from your hard life your kid within?
    am i your lustful need
    do i fill that whole in your soul?
    after all those scars your still willing
    Y? i ask you Y?
    i got over you long ago yet i still thrive for that loveing touch you gave me
    that love of passion in your eyes when you kissed me
    Y? now Y? me






    Submitted on 2007-04-26 02:20:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      thanks, for your comment. my poetry and my music are all i have. i think my insanity would be unbearable with out it.
    | Posted on 2007-06-30 00:00:00 | by EternallyMystic | [ Reply to This ]
      love is hard to get over takes time me my self getting over this hurtful relationship to the end of my begining, your poetry is real and thats what I like to read peoples real feelings,
    Tyson
    | Posted on 2007-04-26 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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