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    dots Submission Name: Blue Wiredots
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    Author: kathleenbrennan
    ASL Info:    20's/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.71 - 80/84/74
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 956
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    dotsBlue Wiredots
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    blue wire.
    candy-cane shoes.
    and i love you.
    books around.
    white brick walls.
    and i love you.
    quiet humming.
    heat's increasing.
    i love you.




    Submitted on 2007-04-26 12:08:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Neat, nifty, so very lovely, romantic, I loved this little poem! Loved it, Loved it! bravo ... bravo...bravo ... michael
    | Posted on 2007-05-03 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      Kathleen, this poem has a "daydream" quality to it, and is a great little love poem! You have a developing talent that shows passion and confidence!
    | Posted on 2007-04-26 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I absolutely love this. It's adorable and extremely heart felt in such a brief way. Wonderful.
    -Kaitlyn.
    | Posted on 2007-04-26 00:00:00 | by numbertwenty | [ Reply to This ]


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