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    dots Submission Name: *The Night It Almost Happeneddots
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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 763
    Class/Type: Story/Love
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    dots*The Night It Almost Happeneddots
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    As we lay in bed on our wedding night just after finally having sex for the first time, I think back to the time we almost did it 5 years ago.

    . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

    You drive up in your sexy sports car and gently close the door. When you get to my footstep my father hesitantly lets you in. Then as I slowly descend the stairs one at a time, you can't take your eyes off of me.
    “You look very beautiful tonight,” you say, as you take my arm and guide me to the door, opening it for me with more chivalry than I have ever seen. I think that is what I was attracted to first and what keeps me tied to you. Along with your good looks and charisma.
    On our way to the restaurant you suggest we get take-out instead. Of course I have no objections. We go through the drive-thru at Harvey's and head on up to "Lover's Lane".
    As soon as we pull up you move closer and start to kiss me. Minutes later we aren't even aware of the food anymore.
    My body starts to surrender under your sweet caresses and meaningful kisses. As your lips touch my pale flesh I feel that rush of electricity all the way though to my toenails. Your hands moving over my body guided by passion and love.
    “I love you,” you chant over and over and over again in my ear, between sensual kisses.
    “Wait, stop, before we go to far" I weakly say, but it's no use because my words are drowned out by your groans of pleasure. As we start to shed our clothing, I hear constant promises of forever that I hope we can keep.
    As the rain pours down on the roof of the car, my heart pounds faster and faster, suddenly realizing what is happening I abruptly stop in confusion. Confusion between wanting you so bad and trying to stay true to my morals.
    What's wrong?" you ask in a breathless voice.
    "Umm...nothing. Nothings wrong." I reply tentatively. While waiting for your kisses to continue.
    "Are you having second thoughts?"
    "I'm not sure. I do want this...but I'm not sure if I’m ready yet."
    "I really wish you were ready cause hell, I know I am! But if your not we should wait."
    "Really? You're willing to wait for me? Are you sure because I know how badly you want this?"
    "Ya I guess so. I should probably take you home soon anyways. Don't want your parents to worry."
    "Ok." I say kind of disappointed and kind of relieved "I'm sorry"
    "It's not that big of a deal I mean if we are going to spend the rest of our lives together then we have a long time to have 'fun'."
    "Ya I know I just wish I was ready. I mean I was looking forward to this...but I’m just not."
    "Hey I said it was fine remember. I love you, ok. I'm happy every minute I'm with you. I don't need to be in your pants 24-7. I'm happy just to be able to watch you sleep."
    "Ok. Hey I love you too and I’m glad that you’re not mad at me. I'm also glad we are able to talk like this." I said as I kiss you softly on the cheek.

    . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

    "Hey, do you remember that one night when we drove up to 'lovers lane'?"




    Submitted on 2007-04-26 15:43:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      How delightful.
    It's a rarity to hear of people waiting for marriage these days.
    I think that has to be one of the hardest things…
    Attempting to bring that sexual spell to an end...................the hardship.
    | Posted on 2007-04-27 00:00:00 | by theDevilsPocket | [ Reply to This ]


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