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    Author: milo stills
    Elite Ratio:    3.37 - 345/476/138
    Words: 230
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       this is my artist statement for an up coming art show


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    Artist Statement

    I am disgusting, so please donít try and make me into something beautiful. I can remember smoke rising from sweat soaked sheets. I can remember soft curly hair twisting between my fingers. I donít try to be ugly. But the world is changing and slowing down; the world is melting like an ice cube between her legs, and she is beautiful.

    Soon we will all understand whatís on the inside.

    I am a river and your judgment is a rotten fish, floating down stream, toward the open ocean. Or maybe I am the fish and you are the river. Or maybe the river is all dried up and the fish are dead.

    In that case I am an old man, turning each fish over and shaking with hunger, shooing away the flies and rats. In that case I am starving and rotten fish is better then dirt and steam, cooked together over ex-girlfriends and best sellers.

    Luckily, soon all of us will burst, water will flow from our finger tips, and plants will grow when we walk side by side. No more words can pass between us; I am covered in paint, my brain a melting ice cube between her legs. So please donít think for one second that I can change the world.




    Submitted on 2007-04-27 14:38:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Powerful, no doubt about it.It's artistically in your face and bland on a personal level of it's creator.

    The world is grime and extremely rough with shiny shards small and large of beautiful things.
    It says you have a sense of how and the way things are or don't need to be.

    | Posted on 2011-03-30 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
      This was very deep. I enjoyed it. The world is an ugly place, you described it encredibly.
    | Posted on 2008-07-31 00:00:00 | by kickit | [ Reply to This ]
      apparently we all are trying to change the world or want to. my english teacher said so, but i try to think that getting a good review would satisfy me enough for a few hours. it terrifies me that you can make me believe that you really may be the token kid of disgust and filth, you can shoo off millions with this write seeming like a modern art kid nazi. but its great. i dont have a [censored] lot to say that'll be significant, but this is the first review ive given in 10 months and i liked every bit of this.
    | Posted on 2007-05-06 00:00:00 | by orderly conduct | [ Reply to This ]
      I feel a bit like that myself. but more like my heart's an ice cube and the times it has melted have been terrible mistakes.

    I hope someone can change the world.
    | Posted on 2007-04-27 00:00:00 | by sierramuse8 | [ Reply to This ]


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