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    dots Submission Name: Lovers Lamentdots
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    Author: babygirl09
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 69/63/49
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 784
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsLovers Lamentdots
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    I donít know her name
    But you have sex with her
    And the painís still the same
    You tell me you love me
    I say itís a lie
    Cause if you really did love me
    Why did you keep it all inside
    As much as I want to say "yes"
    There's something in my mind
    That's keepin me a step behind

    When I look in your eyes
    All my doubts are gone
    I feel whole once again
    And I want to try this again

    Then I think of what caused us
    To break up to begin with
    The familiar pain comes to my eyes
    I have to run away
    So you won't see my pain

    I called you last night
    Realizing what it is you want
    The problem we have though
    Is she might be pregnet
    But there's a possibility
    That it's not your child

    A part of my wants to help you
    And take responsibility
    Another part is yelling "NO!"
    Which everyone says is common sense
    You ask me to not tell anyone
    Through my tears I swear I won't

    We get off the phone
    I stop a second
    To make sure I'm not going to choke
    Getting a grip of myself
    I step out of my room
    Walk into the bathroom
    And cry for a little while more.




    Submitted on 2007-04-27 14:58:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      An old, old lover's lament here...it is old as forever and as new as today nicely done... (how 'bout "Lover's Lament" for a title...) bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-06-20 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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