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    dots Submission Name: I Wanna Knowdots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsI Wanna Knowdots
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    I wanna get to know ya.......
    You already know I Love Ya
    But that not good enough in my eyes of this burning desire for my one and only Lady.

    Going to study every inch of your flawless physique
    From your chocolate brown eyes
    To anything and every thing that makes you cry.

    I wanna know how to become that perfect guy
    I wanna know how to keep you mine
    I wanna know that you’re happy and lovin me and know my love is real for you baby...

    I do swear to be that guy by your side though the good and bad,
    I do swear to pray to the lord for my baby to keep
    I do swear not to hurt you before and after im put down to sleep...

    (I love ya BABY GIRL!!!!)




    Submitted on 2007-04-27 19:28:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love you more.
    | Posted on 2007-04-28 00:00:00 | by Jessica Lynn | [ Reply to This ]


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