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    dots Submission Name: Worshipdots
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    Author: webdevil
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 113/105/43
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWorshipdots
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    As the rain kisses the earth
    and tastes its various curves
    so does my tongue
    ache to be on your flesh
    the soft caress
    that knows each call
    of your hearts rhythm.




    Submitted on 2007-04-28 11:52:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ~*~

    Sounds like an almost delicate passion whispered in a single stanza with an utter dedication to your motifs and word formation. It's been a while since I took the time to read a love poem but I'm glad I did in this case.

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    | Posted on 2007-07-06 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      This was very creative...I only wish it was longer...other than that it had creat use of metaphors/simlies can never tell them apart o well....but i hope you do add to this if u do and it was a great as this i wuold def add it to my fave...

    well hope ot heear from ya and keep up the work..

    Max
    | Posted on 2007-04-29 00:00:00 | by theman | [ Reply to This ]


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