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Gold Dust


Author: Memphis
ASL Info:    21/f/Right Here
Elite Ratio:    5.13 - 130 /158 /31
Words: 68
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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I'm actually writing poetry again


Gold Dust



She is the sound doves make when they cry.
She likes her pizza cold
and her hair long.
She likes to dance alone
to music so loud.
Her prayers are deep;
Her anger--enlightened.
She laughs like she crys,
but her tears boil.
X-rays show her skeleton made of steel,
But the rest of her is water.
You'll never catch her because
Men's hands turn her to gold dust.




Submitted on 2007-04-28 13:00:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It's not bad. I rather enjoyed it. One thing though.

"She laughs like she crys"

'crys' is not a word; it should be 'cries' - but other than that, it was nice.

Cheers and God bless,

~Mandi~
| Posted on 2007-04-28 00:00:00 | by Mandi Gayle | [ Reply to This ]


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