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    dots Submission Name: Thank You!dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       Thank you to those who have made a difference in my life recently, it has not went un noticed.. :)

    ~!*Jackie*!~


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    As one door closes
    Another opens..

    So here I stand...
    With whats happened
    With what will happen

    I take it all in as I do when the sun shines...
    My hair glows..
    My freckles seems to appear upon my face..

    Things have changed,
    But for the best

    There are doors in my life that have closed themselves..
    To never be open
    And other's have opened for me to explore!

    I thank those whom have entered my life
    To make me realize that I am who am I for a reason..
    I thank those whom have left my life
    To make things at ease..

    I acknowledge both, just as well I appericate them equally!

    Thank you God,
    For the time I have spent waiting..
    For this happiness I am experiencing..
    Was well worth it..

    Thank you!




    Submitted on 2007-04-28 14:50:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it. I'm to stubborn to thank those that have given me bad times even if I did survive through them. But that's jut me.... Good write
    | Posted on 2007-05-02 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]
      Yaay - ya did it... I knew you could. AND a) it recognizes and acknowledges that the past can be a bad place where bad things happened but that you CAN leave it behind - and b) it sounds optimistic without trivialising yourself nor sounding cheesy.

    Nice one jackz

    peace'n'love'n'stuff

    Ben

    ps - the freckles line was v v cute....lol
    | Posted on 2007-05-01 00:00:00 | by Ben Gunn | [ Reply to This ]
      Heh, nice one. You speak a lot about happiness in this one, but your others are about depression. Just wish this could happen to everyone, heheh. Shadow
    | Posted on 2007-04-29 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]


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