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    dots Submission Name: I hope you're happydots
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    Author: Anticlownperson
    ASL Info:    16/f/nowhere land
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 248/390/118
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 818
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    Description:
       I care for you so much, and I realised it too late. I'm sorry. I wish you all the happiness in the world. You deserve it.


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    I'm sorry I wasn't quick enough
    I'm sorry that I've let you down
    You deserve much more than this
    I guess I'll be seeing you around

    It took me too long to realise
    How much you've meant to me
    Maybe someday this'll all work out
    We'll just have to wait and see

    This isn't making sense to me
    That you've been here all along
    I thought maybe you'd moved on
    It looks like I'd thought wrong

    If I said I didn't want you back
    You'd have to know it for a lie
    Because however much you disagree
    You're not just any other guy

    I hid from how I felt for you
    I was afraid to show I cared
    you tried to help me open up
    But I was just too scared

    Now I've got you on my mind
    And it's driving me insane
    I've tried to forget about you
    But things just aren't the same

    I want you to be happy again
    You're the first one on my list
    And I hope you two work out
    'Cos you deserve much more than this




    Submitted on 2007-04-28 14:56:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Aww, that's a sad poem! I know where this is coming from, because I've been in this same predicament before. I waited to late to tell someone how I felt about them, and I never got the chance. It really hit close to home for me. Keep it up!
    -AnGeL
    | Posted on 2007-04-29 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]


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