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I hope you're happy
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I care for you so much, and I realised it too late. I'm sorry. I wish you all the happiness in the world. You deserve it.
I hope you're happy
I'm sorry I wasn't quick enough
I'm sorry that I've let you down
You deserve much more than this
I guess I'll be seeing you around
It took me too long to realise
How much you've meant to me
Maybe someday this'll all work out
We'll just have to wait and see
This isn't making sense to me
That you've been here all along
I thought maybe you'd moved on
It looks like I'd thought wrong
If I said I didn't want you back
You'd have to know it for a lie
Because however much you disagree
You're not just any other guy
I hid from how I felt for you
I was afraid to show I cared
you tried to help me open up
But I was just too scared
Now I've got you on my mind
And it's driving me insane
I've tried to forget about you
But things just aren't the same
I want you to be happy again
You're the first one on my list
And I hope you two work out
'Cos you deserve much more than this
Submitted on 2007-04-28 14:56:38
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Aww, that's a sad poem! I know where this is coming from, because I've been in this same predicament before. I waited to late to tell someone how I felt about them, and I never got the chance. It really hit close to home for me. Keep it up!
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