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    dots Submission Name: Whateverdots
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    Author: OrionsStorm
    ASL Info:    18/M/VA
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 180/247/76
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Angry
    Total Views: 1046
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 707



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       this is my little return. tune guitars to D and play some badass Morello riffs for the guitarists. Not about me btw


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    dotsWhateverdots
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    whatever,
    whatever,
    it doesn't matter,
    I don't care,
    whatever,
    whatever

    feelin down, feelin around,
    tryin to get a grip before I hit the ground
    hate the light, hate sound,
    everything making me feel down

    who cares,
    who cares,
    not me,
    I fell nothin
    who cares,
    who cares

    sick of the lies, sick of the treachery
    trying to find someone out of the lechery
    leave me, hate me,
    find a way out of here for me please

    whatever,
    who cares,
    I'm never around,
    I'm never there
    whatever,
    who cares




    Submitted on 2007-04-28 20:04:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      IT'S A MIRACLE!!!!
    YOU'RE BACK!
    i'm so glad to read something from you again.
    it has been the longest time.
    and i see you're still keeping up with your guitar skills.
    i really hope to hear from you soon.
    <33
    Peace.

    <bleedingtears>
    | Posted on 2007-04-28 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really good. Great return Storm, lol. Anyway, I'd love to here it put to music and stuff. It reads well anyway. Good piece, keep writing.


    Love always,

    Sarah
    | Posted on 2007-04-28 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]


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