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    dots Submission Name: Selfish little lies.dots
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    Author: Shadow24968
    ASL Info:    16 Male
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 69/72/34
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
    Total Views: 764
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1270



    Description:
       Really reminds me of life...Hmmmm... Wonder why (sarcastic)


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    dotsSelfish little lies.dots
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    -Chorus-
    I'm just about to move on
    Moving out of life.
    Selfish little lies run through me.
    Selfish little lies that burn eternally.
    The Lies that led you to hell's garden.

    Talk to me I need you
    You're the only one
    That won't tell me a lie.
    Just the one person
    You never try to cry.
    No pain deep inside you.
    Making me terrified.

    -Chorus-
    I'm just about to move on
    Moving out of life.
    Selfish little lies run through me.
    Selfish little lies that burn eternally.
    The Lies that led you to hell's garden.

    Talk to me I need you,
    Now I hear you cry
    Crying out pain and misery.
    Your waiting for me to die.
    All we need is this moment
    To say a little lie.
    A lie that will ruin lives forever.

    -Chorus-
    I'm just about to move on
    Moving out of life.
    Selfish little lies run through me.
    Selfish little lies that burn eternally.
    The Lies that led you to hell's garden.

    A selfish little lie.
    A lie that can kill,
    A lie to say one thing
    A lie to say I love you.




    Submitted on 2007-04-29 08:13:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      nice one but who is the person who wouldnt lie to you.
    | Posted on 2007-04-30 00:00:00 | by SAMEER | [ Reply to This ]
      i would love to hear the music to this it is so good...nice job
    | Posted on 2007-04-30 00:00:00 | by gloomyanddoomy | [ Reply to This ]


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