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    dots Submission Name: Hold My Handdots
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    Author: Persephone
    ASL Info:    19/f/ US
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 328/352/136
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 242
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1083



    Description:
       Ok, lack of sleep and overall tiredness have created this mess. I wrote this really really really late last night, so...yeah, have at it. (If you don't understand or get it or want to know where it came from, PM, and I'd be glad to tell you! ^_^ )


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    dotsHold My Handdots
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    I don't understand why a guy like you,
    would ever want to be with a girl like me,
    I just can't comprehend what there is,
    what you might possibly see.

    I know, I know, another stupid girl,
    who can't see what's right in front of her,
    except we both know, I just don't get it,
    and it doesn't help with all those rogue murmurs.

    So all I ask for a little reassurance,
    that you're still there, you're still here,
    just take my hand, hold me close,
    tell me your still around, or just call me dear.

    You wouldn't guess how comforting it is,
    to just have someone hold your hand,
    because no matter how great a love is,
    I still just want to be comforted, like only you can.

    I know this is pathetic, a pure waste of time,
    I just only wanted to remember you,
    That you're not gone, you're still here,
    But that simple comfort that comes from you,
    Please, just hold my hand.




    Submitted on 2007-04-29 10:24:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was sweet........With the lack of sleep it was still good....One thing i think u should do is some imganery....like piant a picture of the guy or the scence where it's going on...other than that it was good...

    Well hope to hear from you and keep up the good job

    Max
    | Posted on 2007-04-29 00:00:00 | by theman | [ Reply to This ]



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