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    dots Submission Name: Creating a character: Rayne Loki Gordon Tskokidots
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    Author: ellesmera
    ASL Info:    18. Female. England
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 43/263/115
    Words: 546
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsCreating a character: Rayne Loki Gordon Tskokidots
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    Creating a character

    Name: Rayne Loki Gordon Tskoki

    Age: 17

    Appearance: Long blonde hair, Skin coloured eyes. Quite fair skin that burns easy. He wears button up white shirts with sleeves black tops underneath. He wears baggy jeans and battered trainers, the only thing he takes care of is his hair. He has a necklace with a crucifix and a ring as well.

    Occupation: Rayne works for the Tskoki family, he isn’t of much use because of his eyesight problem, but can help sometimes

    Hobbies/ Interests/ Likes/ Dislikes:

    Background/ Family Background and Friends: His father is called Maxwell Antonio Tskoki. His mother is Jennifer Lexia Tskoki, his older brother is Kanermatus Lebran Lestat Dorienn Tskoki and his oldest brother is Selene Alban Tskoki, who is 32 and has a husband named Lebran. They are the top of the Italian Mafia, and are more than ‘well off’. Since Selene is homosexual, he is not entitled to the head of the clan, as he cannot procreate with his partner. Rayne doesn’t have many ‘friends’ he doesn’t have much of anything really... people leave him alone because of his sight.

    Characters Home: Rayne lives in the Tskoki manor. The Tskoki manor is actually 5 mansions joined together with huge hallways, arches, ridges and other things. The grounds are about 10 000 acres or so and they have many country homes all over the world, each the size of a large hotel, apart from Raynes’s private cottage in the small town of Borough. The mansions are elaborate, dating back to the early 18th century, some haven’t hanged much since then, in the grounds there is a huge maze, taking up about 10 acres, its almost impossible to find your way out once you get in. So no on goes in alone… or without a map and some string. There is an apple orchard, stretching over 20 acres, a huge lake, several vine-yards and countless other things. There are stables, falconry, a small farm, a valley, a huge heavily wooded 500 acres and plenty of open fields

    Physicalisation-How does your character move? :
    Rayne’s movements are hesitant and unsure. He walks with his head bowed, looking at the floor, his eyes never meeting people eye to eye... He carries himself badly and has no confidence in himself. His mere presence doesn’t make anyone look once never mind twice

    What does this show about him? :
    This shows he looks down upon himself, and sees even the serving people as higher class than him. He always looks at the ground, as he can’t stand seeing peoples faces, disgusted at his eyes.

    Vocalisation-How does your character speak? :
    Rayne speaks very little and won’t talk too much in a conversation either. He stands well away from the person he is talking with. And the first sign of flirtatious behaviour he runs. He doesn’t usually get angry, he runs away before that happens, and he is rarely in a conference talking about business.

    What does this show about your character? :
    This shows Rayne is not very sociable, and would prefer to just stay invisible. He likes being in Kane’s shadow, happy to escape the limelight his brother bathes in.




    Submitted on 2007-04-30 03:37:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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