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    dots Submission Name: Creating a character: Kane Lebran Lestat Tskokidots
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    Author: ellesmera
    ASL Info:    18. Female. England
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 43/263/115
    Words: 1060
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    dotsCreating a character: Kane Lebran Lestat Tskokidots
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    Creating a character

    Name: Kanermatus Lebran Lestat Dorienn Tskoki
    (Kane)

    Age: 19

    Appearance: Long, almost floor length black hair with red streaks in the fringe. 4 tattoos, one on his groin, which resembles the Tskoki clan. One on his hip which was done out of boredom, and two on his shoulders showing he is from the main branch of the Tskoki lineage. Quite baggy white button up shirts, which are only done up halfway and not tucked in to his black, tight jeans. Two dog collars with the buckles facing the front and the spikes hidden by his hair. A necklace, with a chain wrapped several times round his neck as it is far too long, with a metal rectangular pendant with an engraved crucifix on it. A ring on his left middle finger, silver with 4 spikes protruding from the edge of the large ruby, a smaller ring of rubies circling the larger one. A ring on his right middle finger, silver with a tear drop ruby set in the middle, 4 lines to give the impression of blood on a crucifix. He has a piercing in his left ear, a small crucifix dangling from it and has no other piercings. He wears Italian leather shoes, silk lined. He has features carved by angels and the most brilliant shade of jade green in his eyes. His teeth are sparkly and he is very tall. 6”8 and weighing 87 lbs, which is mostly muscle

    Occupation: Kane works for the Tskoki family, a mafia prince.

    Hobbies/ Interests/ Likes/ Dislikes: He enjoys to draw, he is fascinated with the human body of both genders, his sketchbooks would b rated NC=17 or something like that. He enjoys riding his black stallion, Cercatore, whom he has grown up with since he was 6. He also likes to write novels and is fascinated with the myth/ legend of vampires and demons, researching heavily in to the folklore about them for his books. He is interested in Mathematics, and will help his younger brother, Rayne with his homework, algrbric equations are his forte. He likes pasta; he will never pass up a chance to eat pasta. He also likes to sleep a lot, confessing to everyone he would gladly sleep a warm day away in his orchard. He doesn’t like wine gums, or people waking him up.

    Background/ Family Background and Friends: His father is called Maxwell Antonio Tskoki. His mother is Jennifer Lexia Tskoki, his younger brother is Rayne Loki Gordon Tskoki and his older brother is Selene Alban Tskoki, who is 3 and has a husband names Lebran. They are the top of the Italian Mafia, and are more than ‘well off’. Since Selene is homosexual, he is not entitled to the head of the clan, as he cannot procreate with his partner. Kane doesn’t have many ‘friends’ he has followers though… one of his true friends is called Saxem Demem, a shy, quiet homosexual 19 year old with mental health problems and a liking for sharp things.

    Characters Home: Kane lives in the Tskoki manor. The Tskoki manor is actually 5 mansions joined together with huge hallways, arches, ridges and other things. The grounds are about 10 000 acres or so and they have many country homes all over the world, each the size of a large hotel, apart from Kane’s private cottage in a secluded valley in Wales. The mansions are elaborate, dating back to the early 18th century, some haven’t hanged much since then, in the grounds there is a huge maze, taking up about 10 acres, its almost impossible to find your way out on you get in. So no on goes in alone… or without a map and some string. There is an apple orchard, stretching over 20 acres, a huge lake, several vine-yards and countless other things. There are stables, falconry, a small farm, a valley, a huge heavily wooded 500 acres and plenty of open fields

    Physicalisation-How does your character move? :
    Kane’s movements are precise yet sleek. He walks with his head held high, but not with his nose in the air. The only time he is slumping is when he is physically exhausted. He carries himself well and there is an air of nobility around him. His more presence demands respect. When he enters a party all eyes are on him.

    What does this show about him? :
    This shows he looks after himself, and thinks about how others portray him. He carries himself well, and must have a lot of dignity, yet, he doesn’t have his nose in the air, so is not snobbish. His presence demands respect because of the way he carries himself, and his alarmingly good looks.

    Vocalisation-How does your character speak? :
    Kane speaks with a joking air to his voice, though, if he is talking to a lady he changes, his words become fluid, so that they crave more of his compliments. His flirtatious words, accompanied by soothing touches and fleeting caresses will woo any lady in to submission, not that anyone in their right mind would say no anyway. He always knows what to say, when to say it and how to say it. When talking business however, he’s straight to the point, not worming round the others with sneaky words and hidden meanings, though he is talented in that as well. When he is angry however, his honey words become a wasp’s sting, and can hurt more than a physical attack. His voice becomes filled with spite, hate or sarcasm and an angry air will replace the relaxed one. He doesn’t bluff his way out, and if someone is bluffing, or is trying to make him back out, they will have a hard time, he doesn’t now how to back out. He will call someone’s bluff every time and will always come out on top

    What does this show about your character? :
    This shows Kane is very social and knows how to act on most occasions, as a respectful lord. However, when need be, he will use his way with words as an offence, and even defence. This shows Kane is a very suitable heir to the Tskoki clan, and has respect for everyone, till they give him a reason not too.




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