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Divine Lie

Author: remedy bayden
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Words: 211
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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The person has been raped and then thinks that suicide is the only way out, basically.

Divine Lie

A Blossom of love
where innocence meets
his gentle hand holding
your heart while it beats

What once was a dream
has now been destroyed
as he beats you down like
a broken old toy

His grip is firm
on your neck very tight
you say your final prayer
and beg for good night

The cold wind tembles
on your bare naked flesh
who would have thought he
would leave you such a mess

The moon shines on your skin
with a red october glow
The scratches run down your limbs
like a provackative show

Why'd you have to live
through such a horrible night
leaving the rest of your life
a huge black fright

On the ground you laid praying
to stick it with might
but you knew to yourself
you'd fall down to the knife

The cold wind is blowing
on bare naked arm
the razor slides down
no need to be alarmed

The red greed comes rushing
your breathing becomes shallow
your life is a dissappointment
and your eyes become hallow

Death is upon you
like a knock on the door
curled up on the cold ground
your breath comes no more

Submitted on 2007-04-30 08:42:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  but, why is it so dark... I jst dont understand why u call it as "divine lie"

fancy, u must write more positive stuff. u really freaked me out with this one.

| Posted on 2007-05-19 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]
  That was absolutly amazing. You can definatly feel the emotion in it. It's a really depressing subject but you wrote it very well. Definatly going into my fav.s
| Posted on 2007-05-01 00:00:00 | by bloodydreamer27 | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow... that is really good..its kinda a good way feel the emotion...very well writen...keep up the good work.
| Posted on 2007-04-30 00:00:00 | by never_far_away | [ Reply to This ]

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