Words flowing inside of me, coming out
so you can see.
Everything I will always be.
No need for words with deep meaning that
hide from view my true feelings.
It is just me, plain as can be.
The way I live.
My life, my love, my pain. my words for
you to see.
The simple poet inside of me.
i liked this piece. the title is so fitting for it. it is short and sweet and to the simple point. nothing fancy. just the simple poet. great write. but it think if you changed your line breaks up a little differently it might make it flow better. Like add"coming out" to the beginning of line two. and add "My words for" to the beginning of the second to last line. on line four delete "that" and add it to the beginning of line five, and i dont mean to sound picky, i really like it, i just think maybe i like symetry too! thanks for the read!~~tracy
to whom it was i dont know, but was poigant and cud have been a bit more comple so to speak. it is just that u have written a simple poet in simple terms has suggetively risen u to a good level i.e. u have conveyed a lot with simple words nice work have a nice day bye
Indeed. Very simple, very well-stated. Many poets try to use big, ambiguous words to explain things, and it can ruin it sometimes. A lot more about this world could be understood if we just looked at it with a little ray of simplicity.
Very...dare i say cute? I don't know how to describe it, but it's really good but also really cute. I like the simplicity of it, which i think was in intentional, and it really worked with it. Keep it up!