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    dots Submission Name: THe EnDdots
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    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Rant/Fuck it all
    Total Views: 549
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 758



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       hope ya'll like....
    just dont worry about me...
    i'll be fine.


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    dotsTHe EnDdots
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    this is it, the end of me...
    i've fulfilled my goal, whatever it was...
    and my fate was reached. thats for sure.
    that fickile thing that changes us.
    what gives me lonliness. this damn fate.
    but NO MORE!!
    Fate and Destiny.
    Gods and Devils.
    Love and Hate.
    equaling life and death out
    and we are run by these.
    not me anymore!!
    not with this gun
    wathing you worship a god...NO MORE!!
    no more memories! no more torture...
    soon ill be with her again
    but within death
    together again, forever.
    nothing or nobody will tear us apart again!!
    this is the end
    but this is also the begining
    ...of my happiness...




    Submitted on 2007-04-30 14:04:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hmmmm ditto on the prev. comm. its so dark and full of pain... hope i never make you feel this way, EVER! <3

    -Sharon
    | Posted on 2011-01-20 00:00:00 | by ShadowsnLights | [ Reply to This ]
      This is totally something waaaaay unoriginal. A totally butt-ugly side of a stupid one-sided thinking. Think about it. Why kill the girl u love when u like her living, not lying on the ground or coffin wadsoever?

    If only the cause of your 'end' is something else other than stupid love or this girl, it gives me something else to talk about.
    | Posted on 2007-05-01 00:00:00 | by RyukiTZR | [ Reply to This ]


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