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    dots Submission Name: Shitdots
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    Author: Guernica
    ASL Info:    17/male
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 77/114/67
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsShitdots
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    do you know what I was thinking of the other day, Carol?

    what were you thinking of?

    I was thinking of all the shades of brown my shit's been over the years, you know. it's been yellow and green, when you're a baby, it is. it's been red, sure as hell been red. never been orange. yours ever been orange, Carol? mine was violet the other day. I think I can die now cause my shit's been violet.

    I don't think you'll be doin any dying anytime soon.

    hate to prove you wrong. or maybe I wouldn't.




    Submitted on 2007-04-30 19:25:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh my gosh, this poem is SO freaky. Are you some sort of stalker-killer dude? lol (i think). Um, I have a sense of humor, but not for this poem.
    -AnGeL

    Just plain freaky.
    | Posted on 2007-05-02 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]


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