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    dots Submission Name: "I'M THAT ATHEIST"dots
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    Author: SAMEER
    ASL Info:    18/M/INDIA
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 47/21/28
    Words: 307
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 1060
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 1884



    Description:
       I REALLY DON'T BELIEVE IN GOD.IT REALLY IS DEPRESSING THAT WE STILL HAVENT SEEN SCIENCE AS OUR CREATOR.


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    dots"I'M THAT ATHEIST"dots
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    ATHEIST
    YES I'M AN ATHEIST
    NOT A PRIEST
    MY AIM TO CAUSE A BLAST
    THE EFFECT WHICH WILL LAST
    TILL ALL THIS BELIEF
    IS TURNED INTO RELIEF
    I DON'T WANT TO KILL
    BUT STILL
    JUST WANTED TO SAY
    YOU MAY
    HAVE FAITH
    BUT NOT TO THE POINT OF INTOLERANCE
    MIND IT
    I'M NOT SPEAKING NONSENSE
    WANTED TO SAY
    THE WAY
    YOU HAVE TRUST FAITH AND BELIEF
    DUE TO WHICH
    MANY HERE ARE TURNING TODAYS THIEF
    BREAKING ALL LAWS
    BUT HE IS NOT AN OUTLAW
    HE'S MAKING TEMPLES
    MAKING CHURCH,
    MAKING MOSQUES,
    TAKING LIFE'S AND
    MAKING MONEY


    WE HAVE TO CHANGE
    NOT FOR REVENGE
    STOP TRUSTING IN GOD
    YOUR OMNIPRESENT LORD
    MAKE YOUR SELF YOUR OWN GOD
    I'M SAYING THIS "THE BARD"
    WASTE NOT YOUR TIME
    IN TEMPLES,CHURCHES,AND MOSQUES
    IT IS A CRIME
    TO WASTE ALL THE TIME
    YOU COULD USE TO MAKE MONEY
    MORE AND MORE MONEY
    STOP NOT TILL YOU REACH YOUR GOAL
    MAKING NAME
    MAKING FAME
    BELIEVE IN SCIENCE
    YOUR OWN CONSCIENCE
    CUT IT OUT YOUR SUPERSTITION
    STOP SACRIFICING GIVE PROTECTION
    EVERY TIME
    PROBLEMS COME ACROSS YOUR STATION
    RESIST THAT TEMPTATION
    TO SAY
    "GOD SAVE ME"
    USE YOUR MIND TO REVISE
    THE PROBLEM
    YOU ARE FREE TO TAKE SUGGESTION
    AND ARRIVE AT YOUR OWN DECISION


    FOR ONE LAST TIME
    I WANT TO MAKE THIS BRIEF
    GOD IS JUST A BELIEF
    THE DAY YOU UNDERSTAND THIS
    THE WORLD FOR YOU
    WOULD BE FULL OF BLISS.


    ---THEBARD
    ---SAMEER UDUPA




    Submitted on 2007-05-01 00:47:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This sort of stuff has its entertainment value!
    | Posted on 2007-05-10 00:00:00 | by moaxcym | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow..
    I like it.
    I like how it rhymes
    -Kimmi

    | Posted on 2007-05-01 00:00:00 | by Childe-Wrote | [ Reply to This ]


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