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    dots Submission Name: random thought...dots
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    Author: pixie_007
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 45/77/63
    Words: 281
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
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       I can't remember why I wrote all of this but it kinda just poured out of my head for no reason...


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    dotsrandom thought...dots
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    " Tried a few times to say goodnight but I guess I had to be there to
    kiss you awake... "

    This never made sense to me untill one day I read it again,all this time I've always wondered what you meant when you said this and now I know...

    Guess its like that time you said you'd kill yourself and I was too far away to rush to your side and make sure you were ok. I had called you over and over and over again. You said I called 99 times,I cried over you thinking the worst had happened,and yet you were safe just like you were every other night... But still I cried.

    " every tear i cried was for the love i have for you,every kiss we
    shared was for the joy you bring to me and every touch we experienced was
    for the future that I hope to have with you.
    I cant tell you just how much i love you because i fear that my words
    would never be enough for you. trust me on this one,there's no one i
    love more than you. and if you say you saw all the things you say you saw
    in my eyes then you should know that I'm not deceiving you when I say
    that I love you and only you,that i'll be true to only you and that i'll
    wait for you even if it means waiting till the end of forever.... "

    Nothing made any sense to me until you came and showed me the way...




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      I kind of agree with Ben Gunn...I'm not sure if I got out of it what I was supposed to..I was kinda confused on the meaning....but I do know it was beautiful. The last part that is in quotations in my opinion pretty much the epitome of the words coming from someone who is very much in love. If someone wrote this to you, you are very lucky, and I'm glad that you've been shown the way. Great write. ~hailie~
    | Posted on 2007-05-03 00:00:00 | by loveispain | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm not sure whether I find this deeply sad or deeply moving.

    Hold those thoughts, I'll re-read it and re-comment.

    Nope. I want to say more but I'm not sure I haven't mis-judged it.

    peace'n'love'n'stuff

    Ben Gunn

    | Posted on 2007-05-01 00:00:00 | by Ben Gunn | [ Reply to This ]


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