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    dots Submission Name: My Guardian Angeldots
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    Author: Persephone
    ASL Info:    19/f/ US
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 328/352/136
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 988
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    Description:
       hmmm...yeah...school summed up. I'm in a sad mood and this is what came about from it. It's more random thought than poem.


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    My guardian angel must be lost,
    she might have taken a right,
    when I took a left.

    My guardian angel must not notice,
    that her charge isn't there,
    that she's missing one person.

    My guardian angel must be somewhere,
    she might have found my twin,
    and thought she had the right girl.

    My guardian angel must be gone,
    because she wasn't here
    when I needed her the most.

    She must be far from here,
    And the place I keep getting hurt,
    or would she really let me faulter
    around this high school court?




    Submitted on 2007-05-01 17:06:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this one, Sephe. I hope she catches up with you soon, at least before you go off to school. *Hugs*
    | Posted on 2007-08-18 00:00:00 | by jennah | [ Reply to This ]


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