Description: So again, Creative Writing. This was originally this was a two tone poem, and in a sense it still is. However, this is showing three sides of me, not the original two it was supposed to have. I liked this one, but bash it if you want. it's your thoughts anyway.
- Kyle B.
Turn Two to Thr33 and You Have Me -------------------------------------------
Part of me is neon white
Blank and standard
Slick yet bland
Living in a white room known as my mind.
Deeper outside I'm flat black
Dead and fluent
Smart compared to scared
Sitting in a room with constant sounds for my head.
With solid details that hang off my head and I'm part balloon red
Happy to this blast
Clowns cheery on a rainy day
This is the mask that shows to the others in this masquerade ball.
Two of these seem unreal, but are true,
One of them is the only reality to you.
This is really good
I liked how you showed that the colors of the world help guide our human soul forward
I also really like how you showed that all people are created by many different personalities
It is not just one face that we always show to others
Again you did a really good job with this
It was great to read your poetry again
I always liked how your poetry always made me think
My Mother said to Thank You for the nice words about her poetry