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Submission Name:
Despise
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Author:
Childe-Wrote
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320
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Poetry/Dark
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Despise
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I don't know
Can't explain
You ask me why
I can't tell you
I despise him
This hatred burning
I'm not stupid
It's all about him
Mr. Perfect, will you leave?
I don't want you
Just go live on the streets
Miss you not
Love you neither
It's all your fault
Why can't you realize?
When will you learn
Mother loves me best
You will never see
You will never know
Uncle is a right
You'll never get
Father you'll never become
Your just a child
How many times
must I call you stupid
How many hurt feelings
must you get when I wish you to die
Have I ever told you
How much I despise you
Brother is a name
You never have earned
Sorry excuse for a human being
You're the reason
I despise this family
I hate you
I hate you
I said I hate you
Everytime
Everyday
I look at you
Reminds me how much I screwed up
Submitted on 2007-05-01 18:49:19
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So much hate toward you brother.. I like the fact that you can feel the angre in your wirting. It makes one wonder what he had done to make you despise him so... Good write.
| Posted on 2007-05-02 00:00:00 | by
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