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    dots Submission Name: Despisedots
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    Author: Childe-Wrote
    Elite Ratio:    1.86 - 17/47/39
    Words: 320
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsDespisedots
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    I don't know
    Can't explain

    You ask me why
    I can't tell you

    I despise him
    This hatred burning

    I'm not stupid
    It's all about him

    Mr. Perfect, will you leave?
    I don't want you
    Just go live on the streets

    Miss you not
    Love you neither

    It's all your fault
    Why can't you realize?
    When will you learn
    Mother loves me best

    You will never see
    You will never know

    Uncle is a right
    You'll never get
    Father you'll never become
    Your just a child

    How many times
    must I call you stupid
    How many hurt feelings
    must you get when I wish you to die

    Have I ever told you
    How much I despise you

    Brother is a name
    You never have earned
    Sorry excuse for a human being

    You're the reason
    I despise this family

    I hate you
    I hate you
    I said I hate you

    Everytime
    Everyday
    I look at you
    Reminds me how much I screwed up




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      So much hate toward you brother.. I like the fact that you can feel the angre in your wirting. It makes one wonder what he had done to make you despise him so... Good write.
    | Posted on 2007-05-02 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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