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    dots Submission Name: Rubik Cubedots

    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dotsRubik Cubedots

    Climbing that mountain called life
    Climbing, climbing and keep on climbing in till the end of my life.

    At a crossroad in my young life
    Is this just another hill with a cliff waiting for me to fall off into the valley to fight another round with the thought of death.

    My life is that unfinished rubric cube
    so complicated
    Looking for a logical explanation
    to come to a healthy realization.

    Submitted on 2007-05-01 21:34:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like the ending the best, cuz it makes more sense to me, but what youve written about, i get what your trying to say. i just don't know what im trying to say. lol. Just beat up the thought of death ok? and if he beats you up, well then im gonna get him!
    | Posted on 2007-05-02 00:00:00 | by Jessica Lynn | [ Reply to This ]

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